Pleaze is this a good poem?!?!? part one?

I notice how tall she is first


Her thick wavy hair


Falling just below her neck


Sandy hair held back tightly


Her chestnut eyes sheltered by full eyebrows


She lifts a long finger catching an untamable


Stray hair, protecting her scared chin





Obsessed with anything not normal


Geeky yet curious in all ways


Her bluntness a quality I admire most


A wall flower at anything social


But lively with the people she is comfortable around


Not afraid to dance in a crowded parking lot


The feeling she was born in the wrong place, the wrong time





She is active with anything


A true leader


A player on many teams


A friend, a sister


A daughter, a niece


Many heritages to mark her





Addicted vampire romance literature


An avid Jane Austen fan


Her secret ability to write poetry


Constantly producing story ideas


Her family crazy but normal


Her patience and ability to keep quiet


Having so much to say but rarely listened to


Even through the hints

Pleaze is this a good poem?!?!? part one?
uh..i think u might need a thesuarus and change up some of the words ok??


good luck tho!!


but otherwise its pretty damn good!
Reply:It%26#039;s good...I hope you get your Transylvanian accent.
Reply:very long but good, try rhyming in at least 2 or 3 places.




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