say you and your loved one break up for about 3 weeks, then you tell your shared friends that you are moving on. Then you find out from one of your friends that he has been asking about you every week, and that he has put on weight and isnt himself. Then out of the blue he calls you and needs to talk. Now yall are seeing eachother again(you talk about 3 times a week and see eachother about 2 times week, yall do everything you did before and you are soo happy when your with eachother) then you find out he still has all of your love letter/lil notes and the first flower you ever gave him,plus his momma still has your pic. on her wall. He tells you that he doesnt want anyother girl but he cant be in a relationship right now(i know that he cant be in one,thats true,if u knew what all he has to do.U know he cares about you cause he always makes sure your ok, and when my car broke down in our winter storm he came and fixed it. What does is mean,does he still love me? Will we be 2gether again
Help me please!!!?
He may still love you, yes. But what exactly is keeping him from being in a relationship with you?
I would not count on this individual to commit to you. This guy sounds like he may be confused or unsure. And he may take a long time making up his mind. If his indecision is causing you heartache, then you need to do what is going to preserve your sanity. You need to do what is good for you. This may mean moving on. This may mean not waiting around for him.
I'm sorry if this sounds harsh. It sounds like you still have feelings for him. I don't know your exact circumstances. However, I do know what it is like to be jerked around by a guy who couldn't decide if I was "the one." It's not fun, and it's not worth your time.
If you are really set on this guy, you may have to wait for a long time for him to come to his senses. Ask yourself, honestly, is he worth it?
Good luck.
Reply:Any man that will come out in a winter storm to fix your car has to love you, come on now. Don't wait for him to decide what happens in your life, stop wasting time and find someone else to love.
Reply:It sounds like he still cares about you a lot,
I'd be patient and see how it goes.
If he has a lot happeneing in his life.
maybe you can be a good friend to him now
and renew the romance later when you
are both more settled.
I say give him some time-
maybe he will forget or you will forget him,
or maybe he will be ready for your love
when life is less crazy.
Reply:wow u kno he definetly still cares about u alot. if u still feel something for him u should ask him about it. like ask if he still has feelings for u. tell him to b completely honest and if he is honest u will be too. dont feel like u have to love him if he still loves u. there is no need to drag it on if u dont feel the same way. just be honest with him and yourself. u need to have yourfeelings out in the open. your feelings and his. he should let out how he feels about u too.
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Should i go with my heart!?
say you and your loved one break up for about 3 weeks, then you tell your shared friends that you are moving on. Then you find out from one of your friends that he has been asking about you every week, and that he has put on weight and isnt himself. Then out of the blue he calls you and needs to talk. Now yall are seeing eachother again(you talk about 3 times a week and see eachother about 2 times week, yall do everything you did before and you are soo happy when your with eachother) then you find out he still has all of your love letter/lil notes and the first flower you ever gave him,plus his momma still has your pic. on her wall. He tells you that he doesnt want anyother girl but he cant be in a relationship right now(i know that he cant be in one,thats true,if u knew what all he has to do.U know he cares about you cause he always makes sure your ok, and when my car broke down in our winter storm he came and fixed it. I think we will be 2gether again, do u?
Should i go with my heart!?
The bottom line is that he clearly told you he cannot be in a relationship with you right now.You must move on at least for now.If you are meant to end up together in the future,life will bring you together.Do not put yourself in a situation where you could end up getting hurt. He needs to make a decision,either he wants to make room in his life for you or not.And if the answer is no,then you need to use this time to explore other possibilities.He must be understanding of this, since he is not offering you anything secure.Do not allow yourself to play this game.You can not entertain him at his convenience,That isn't fair to you.Remember a relationship is a two way street and if he really cares for you he will find his way back into your life.
Reply:well, he still like you???so, why don't you give him a chance and some space..........
Reply:Know why your head is placed above your heart? SO you'll be able to come uip with more sound decisions in life. To me it is more practical to look at the pros and cons of that kind of a relationship that you have right now. Ask yourself if it is ok for you to wait 4 years. If you're sure that things will be the same from today until he decides to marry you, then by all means give it another chance. If there's one hind of a doubt, I say you put a stop to it as early as now and find someone who will love you the way you love him.
Reply:Maybe he's going through some things that he needs to work through. Give him time and be there for him.
Good luck to you! Sounds like true love!
Reply:sometimes u have to listien to you're heart and let it guide us to the right direction, if he called u out of the blue that means he is thinking of u, and that is a good sign, but the best advice olny can come from you're heart, good luck to u.
Reply:Um...yes! He's a "keeper."
Reply:pray, and ask god, he will give you an answer far better than anyone online, or even you can give youself
Reply:Yes
Reply:If you know the reason why he can't be in a relationship right now and you know it's true, wait for him. If you know he's the one, wait. There's nothing worse than losing the love of your life, and I personally know thats true. He seems like he's the one for you, and the question is are you willing to wait for him? If you really love him, you will.
Reply:There is love there in both your hearts you can make this a great mariage.
Remember it takes more then love to make a marriage work.
there is also commitment, deciding who will do what in the marriage, who is the leader. You need to plan your mariage past the wedding day.
Reply:I'm telling you this, do not let this guy go!! He seems to be a sincere and loyal person, give him a lil break, but also maybe ask him, roughly how long you will have to wait!
Reply:no sounds like trouble to me
Reply:well the same thing happend to me my ex came back to me after seven months that was the first time and then it only lasted three months and then we broke up again and for the second time which again it lasted another three months and the he come back for a third time which also lasted three months and then we got back for a forth time which only lasted a week . the last he and i where toghther was for the fifth time which was six months ago in september 2005 .
and so i would tell you to forget it he is not worth it do not give him any more chances he will only hurt you again
Shelley
Reply:Sounds to me the two of you are in love.You are happy when you are together.you are talking %26amp;seeing each other I say give it some time and you will be together again
Reply:yes
Reply:always follow your deepest instinct..if you feel as though you can accept his conditions then you should..if not move on..
Reply:you are going to have to give it time. mabie he needs this break, who know what he does at night when he's by himself. who knows what he's thinking. give it time it'll all work out.
Reply:I would go with my heart! If you do not take a chance you will never know if it is the one or not, and you will never learn anything from it if it doesn't work out. I would be cautious as to why he cannot be in a relationship and what made him walk away for three weeks. If you both are young and this is your first love be careful and just take one step at a time and take it day by day, just do as you are and wait on getting married and getting involved in a LTR.
Reply:You should always follow your heart. It might seem like your going down the wrong path, but you will never know unless you try. My motto is Always follow your heart.
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Should i go with my heart!?
The bottom line is that he clearly told you he cannot be in a relationship with you right now.You must move on at least for now.If you are meant to end up together in the future,life will bring you together.Do not put yourself in a situation where you could end up getting hurt. He needs to make a decision,either he wants to make room in his life for you or not.And if the answer is no,then you need to use this time to explore other possibilities.He must be understanding of this, since he is not offering you anything secure.Do not allow yourself to play this game.You can not entertain him at his convenience,That isn't fair to you.Remember a relationship is a two way street and if he really cares for you he will find his way back into your life.
Reply:well, he still like you???so, why don't you give him a chance and some space..........
Reply:Know why your head is placed above your heart? SO you'll be able to come uip with more sound decisions in life. To me it is more practical to look at the pros and cons of that kind of a relationship that you have right now. Ask yourself if it is ok for you to wait 4 years. If you're sure that things will be the same from today until he decides to marry you, then by all means give it another chance. If there's one hind of a doubt, I say you put a stop to it as early as now and find someone who will love you the way you love him.
Reply:Maybe he's going through some things that he needs to work through. Give him time and be there for him.
Good luck to you! Sounds like true love!
Reply:sometimes u have to listien to you're heart and let it guide us to the right direction, if he called u out of the blue that means he is thinking of u, and that is a good sign, but the best advice olny can come from you're heart, good luck to u.
Reply:Um...yes! He's a "keeper."
Reply:pray, and ask god, he will give you an answer far better than anyone online, or even you can give youself
Reply:Yes
Reply:If you know the reason why he can't be in a relationship right now and you know it's true, wait for him. If you know he's the one, wait. There's nothing worse than losing the love of your life, and I personally know thats true. He seems like he's the one for you, and the question is are you willing to wait for him? If you really love him, you will.
Reply:There is love there in both your hearts you can make this a great mariage.
Remember it takes more then love to make a marriage work.
there is also commitment, deciding who will do what in the marriage, who is the leader. You need to plan your mariage past the wedding day.
Reply:I'm telling you this, do not let this guy go!! He seems to be a sincere and loyal person, give him a lil break, but also maybe ask him, roughly how long you will have to wait!
Reply:no sounds like trouble to me
Reply:well the same thing happend to me my ex came back to me after seven months that was the first time and then it only lasted three months and then we broke up again and for the second time which again it lasted another three months and the he come back for a third time which also lasted three months and then we got back for a forth time which only lasted a week . the last he and i where toghther was for the fifth time which was six months ago in september 2005 .
and so i would tell you to forget it he is not worth it do not give him any more chances he will only hurt you again
Shelley
Reply:Sounds to me the two of you are in love.You are happy when you are together.you are talking %26amp;seeing each other I say give it some time and you will be together again
Reply:yes
Reply:always follow your deepest instinct..if you feel as though you can accept his conditions then you should..if not move on..
Reply:you are going to have to give it time. mabie he needs this break, who know what he does at night when he's by himself. who knows what he's thinking. give it time it'll all work out.
Reply:I would go with my heart! If you do not take a chance you will never know if it is the one or not, and you will never learn anything from it if it doesn't work out. I would be cautious as to why he cannot be in a relationship and what made him walk away for three weeks. If you both are young and this is your first love be careful and just take one step at a time and take it day by day, just do as you are and wait on getting married and getting involved in a LTR.
Reply:You should always follow your heart. It might seem like your going down the wrong path, but you will never know unless you try. My motto is Always follow your heart.
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What are some tropical, evergreen flowering trees that do not get big?
Looking for some tropical, evergreen trees that bloom bright or pretty colored flowers and that stay fairly small (no more than 12-15 feet high) to plant along a block wall!
I live in Zone 9 so we have extreme heat and some cold.
What are some tropical, evergreen flowering trees that do not get big?
Feijoa is a small tree a bit bushy nice red flowers and delicious fruit---can be used as a hedge but only grows to about 8 feet originates from South America but adapts to different climates. We also have a Guava (originates Haiti) ours has yellow fruit which is very highly scented. The Guava is a very decorative tree with smooth mottled bark and has large white flowers. The large yellow fruit are highly visible. Ours is about 12 feet. Our climate is hot with some cold also (south Australia)
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I live in Zone 9 so we have extreme heat and some cold.
What are some tropical, evergreen flowering trees that do not get big?
Feijoa is a small tree a bit bushy nice red flowers and delicious fruit---can be used as a hedge but only grows to about 8 feet originates from South America but adapts to different climates. We also have a Guava (originates Haiti) ours has yellow fruit which is very highly scented. The Guava is a very decorative tree with smooth mottled bark and has large white flowers. The large yellow fruit are highly visible. Ours is about 12 feet. Our climate is hot with some cold also (south Australia)
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What are good cascading flowers to plant?
I want to plant some flowers in rectangular planters on my porch. I would like plants and flowers that will cascade over the outside walls of my porch. What are good cascading plants, that are easy to care for?
Thanks :)
What are good cascading flowers to plant?
I love verbena.
It tolerates drought and heat well- so you don't have to be so carefull about watering it. It survives the season looking neat and tidy.
Lantana looks nice and tolerates lots of sun and thrives in the heat. Another one that looks good all season
Petunias look lovely but require deadheading to keep in full bloom. But are a no-fail favorite and come in many colors.
They can get leggy late in the season but bloom so profusely it makes up for all else.
You could find all of those at your local garden center without alot of trouble. In another a month I'll be able to go to Lowe's and get started on my outside planters.
good luck and happy planting
Reply:For sunny planters.. Wave petunias. they spread and bloom like crazy. they're easy to care for.
Reply:Everything already mentioned is good. I'd add sweet potato vines. Try "blackie", it's a dark purple variety, and the more common light green ones) with coleus (pinch off tops of coleus to make them trail.) Nasturtiums are good, too.
Reply:Try wave petunias and see how that works out =)
Reply:Petunias are very good plants for cascading over the side of containers. Mums are another good cascading plant however, at first when they start to grow, you will need to train them by using a piece of wire such as a hanger so they will cascade. Once they start, they will continue to grow up to several feet.
Reply:I enjoy growing ivy geraniums. They come in varing shades of pink or pink and white striped. Bloom spring through 1st frost.
Reply:If it is full sun, some of the vining annuals would be great: Morning Glory, Four O Clock, Sweat Pea, etc... If it is in shade, you can get the result you want by planting some impatiens and just lean them by the edge when planting them.
Reply:wavy petunias are a good choice, you don't need to dead head them like the regular petunias.
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Thanks :)
What are good cascading flowers to plant?
I love verbena.
It tolerates drought and heat well- so you don't have to be so carefull about watering it. It survives the season looking neat and tidy.
Lantana looks nice and tolerates lots of sun and thrives in the heat. Another one that looks good all season
Petunias look lovely but require deadheading to keep in full bloom. But are a no-fail favorite and come in many colors.
They can get leggy late in the season but bloom so profusely it makes up for all else.
You could find all of those at your local garden center without alot of trouble. In another a month I'll be able to go to Lowe's and get started on my outside planters.
good luck and happy planting
Reply:For sunny planters.. Wave petunias. they spread and bloom like crazy. they're easy to care for.
Reply:Everything already mentioned is good. I'd add sweet potato vines. Try "blackie", it's a dark purple variety, and the more common light green ones) with coleus (pinch off tops of coleus to make them trail.) Nasturtiums are good, too.
Reply:Try wave petunias and see how that works out =)
Reply:Petunias are very good plants for cascading over the side of containers. Mums are another good cascading plant however, at first when they start to grow, you will need to train them by using a piece of wire such as a hanger so they will cascade. Once they start, they will continue to grow up to several feet.
Reply:I enjoy growing ivy geraniums. They come in varing shades of pink or pink and white striped. Bloom spring through 1st frost.
Reply:If it is full sun, some of the vining annuals would be great: Morning Glory, Four O Clock, Sweat Pea, etc... If it is in shade, you can get the result you want by planting some impatiens and just lean them by the edge when planting them.
Reply:wavy petunias are a good choice, you don't need to dead head them like the regular petunias.
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What color should I paint my living room walls?
My couch and chair that match are both a very pale brown called "ash brown." I have an accent chair that is purple, like a dark lavender color. My curtains are kind of beige with slate-blue and purple flowers. My tv center is dark brown and my coffee/side tables are dark brown metal with glass tops.
Right now I have light lavender walls with a purple accent wall, but the walls look terrible with the couch. I was thinking of doing a trendy but fairly neutral green for all the walls instead. Any specific color ideas or suggestions? I'm going to get the sears easy living paint as it's really wonderful for one-coating.
What color should I paint my living room walls?
play around with the Sherwin Williams color visualizer to find something that you like. It is the best paint visualizer on the web, imho. I like how their color palette is laid out, I like that you can search by color family %26amp; color name, the "painted" rooms look the most realistic, and it suggests coordinating color schemes. You can literally spend hours:
http://www.sherwin.com/visualizer/
I suggest a muted yellow like "Harvester" (# 6373). It will contrast the purple %26amp; look truly stunning.
Reply:If you want your couch to go with your walls then see if you can match a pantone or paint color to your couch color. Then look at a color wheel at the paint section to see what colors go with your couch color. I am sure some greens will be in there, but you might see some other colors in there that you did not think about. If you have to, take a pillow from your couch with you to the paint section to find the color chip that is the same as your couch.
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Right now I have light lavender walls with a purple accent wall, but the walls look terrible with the couch. I was thinking of doing a trendy but fairly neutral green for all the walls instead. Any specific color ideas or suggestions? I'm going to get the sears easy living paint as it's really wonderful for one-coating.
What color should I paint my living room walls?
play around with the Sherwin Williams color visualizer to find something that you like. It is the best paint visualizer on the web, imho. I like how their color palette is laid out, I like that you can search by color family %26amp; color name, the "painted" rooms look the most realistic, and it suggests coordinating color schemes. You can literally spend hours:
http://www.sherwin.com/visualizer/
I suggest a muted yellow like "Harvester" (# 6373). It will contrast the purple %26amp; look truly stunning.
Reply:If you want your couch to go with your walls then see if you can match a pantone or paint color to your couch color. Then look at a color wheel at the paint section to see what colors go with your couch color. I am sure some greens will be in there, but you might see some other colors in there that you did not think about. If you have to, take a pillow from your couch with you to the paint section to find the color chip that is the same as your couch.
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Can someone check My paragraph for any errors please?
I live in a typical house as all houses around my block with palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bath, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. We always try to keep my house clean, dishes are always washed, and trash always taken out and the wood floor is always broomed. However, sometimes there’s dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. In the garage is where my family stores all our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables around the large sofa, portrait of a flower and pictures on top of the middle table and paste on the wall. My room which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener.
Can someone check My paragraph for any errors please?
I live in a typical house similar to all the houses around my block with palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bathroom, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. We always try to keep my house clean, dishes are always washed, and trash always taken out and the wood floor is always swept. However, sometimes there’s dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. The garge is where my family stores all our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear any longer. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables around the large sofa, portrait of a flower, pictures on top of the middle table and paste on the wall. My room which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener.
Reply:paste on the wall
WTF??
Reply:I live in a typical house (much) as all houses around my block (we have) palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bath, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. We always try to keep my house clean, dishes are always washed, and trash always taken out and the wood floor is always broomed (replace with swept (depending on country)). However, sometimes there’s (change to there is) dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. In the garage is where my family stores all (*change "all" to unused or extra, since you store your material belongings in your house also) our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables [around] (change to beside) the large sofa, (a) portrait of a flower and pictures on top of the middle table and paste(d) on the wall. My room (comma here, or begin parenthesis, end parenthesis after house, if no parenthesis, use comma again after "house") which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and (replace and with comma) clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener.
Reply:I would suggest fixing your first sentence.
Example: I live in a typical house, as are all houses on my block. There are palm trees by the streets...
Other than that it's fine. I would maybe elaborate on your room since it's your favorite part of the house. Why is it your favorite? Maybe give more of a description.
Reply:No i cannot. Why cant you?
Reply:there are a few comma errors, and the whole paragraph is sort of jumbled. try breaking up a few of the sentences and varying the sentence structure...varying sentence structure is important-it makes the piece more interesting and simpler to follow.
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Can someone check My paragraph for any errors please?
I live in a typical house similar to all the houses around my block with palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bathroom, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. We always try to keep my house clean, dishes are always washed, and trash always taken out and the wood floor is always swept. However, sometimes there’s dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. The garge is where my family stores all our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear any longer. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables around the large sofa, portrait of a flower, pictures on top of the middle table and paste on the wall. My room which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener.
Reply:paste on the wall
WTF??
Reply:I live in a typical house (much) as all houses around my block (we have) palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bath, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. We always try to keep my house clean, dishes are always washed, and trash always taken out and the wood floor is always broomed (replace with swept (depending on country)). However, sometimes there’s (change to there is) dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. In the garage is where my family stores all (*change "all" to unused or extra, since you store your material belongings in your house also) our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables [around] (change to beside) the large sofa, (a) portrait of a flower and pictures on top of the middle table and paste(d) on the wall. My room (comma here, or begin parenthesis, end parenthesis after house, if no parenthesis, use comma again after "house") which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and (replace and with comma) clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener.
Reply:I would suggest fixing your first sentence.
Example: I live in a typical house, as are all houses on my block. There are palm trees by the streets...
Other than that it's fine. I would maybe elaborate on your room since it's your favorite part of the house. Why is it your favorite? Maybe give more of a description.
Reply:No i cannot. Why cant you?
Reply:there are a few comma errors, and the whole paragraph is sort of jumbled. try breaking up a few of the sentences and varying the sentence structure...varying sentence structure is important-it makes the piece more interesting and simpler to follow.
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Can someone help me make a conclusion for this essay? and correct any mistakes? please?
My home and family are really important to me. My home is where I grew up. A place where all my family co-exists and eats dinner every Sunday. My home is a unique place.
My home is a typical house as all houses around my block with palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bath, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. My home is always semi–clean, dishes are always washed, trash always taken out and the wood floor is always broom but there is dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. In the garage is where my family stores all our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables around the large sofa, portrait of a flower and pictures on top of the middle table and paste on the wall. My room which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener. My room is like my sanctuary because is where I can relax, have peace and privacy.
My family is one of the typical Mexican families. We go to church, celebrate important dates such as “Las Posada” (Mexican Christmas Ceremony), Thanksgiving and Christmas. My family is really compatible and hardworking. My mom is a hard worker, brave, and strong. She has been a dad and a mom to me at the same time; she has been the only one that been there for me, the only one that has work for me and my siblings, to give us a better life and the only person that has preoccupied about us. She had even worked up to twelve hours a day to set a roof over our heads. My step-dad is a serious and earnest person, he doesn’t like to drink, doesn’t likes fast food nor go to parties but he likes to watch the soccer game and spend time with the family. In contrast of my 19 year old brother, which he lives in Mexico, he’s an alcoholic, loves to go to parties, likes clubbing and spends time with his friends instead of his family. My younger sister Leslie is annoying, stubborn and messy. She never listens to me, she always do the contrary of what I say.
My favorite part my family is when we all co-exists including my aunts, uncles, and cousins. We all gather to go to church, eat dinner, and watch a soccer game or a movie. In my family women make the dinner but when they all work my uncles and my step-dad make dinner, they take turns. When my uncles and step-dad cooks they always make carne asada, the only food that they can cook well. Whereas my mom and aunts cook different sort of food such as shrimp soup or “birria”, which is a goat meat. When all my naughty little cousins assemble its like a commotion in a hallway, they scream, talk loud and dance, making a big mess all around the house, jumping on the couches like frogs, playing with toys and leaving them on the ground, and hanging on the entrance fence like monkeys on monkey bars.
My family is really important to me because from there is where I get all my strength to go forward in life. With out them by my side I could not be what I am today. I would do anything for them. From them is where I get support, love and advice. I belief that with out family and love we would not be able to live or progress in life.
Can someone help me make a conclusion for this essay? and correct any mistakes? please?
where you say "always broom" I believe it should be always broomed. You do say My home too many times try beginning the sentence with something like my parents... my sisters... my brothers... help keep my house clean. etc etc. Another good way to not say "my home" is "we always keep my house..." "sometimes we..." "Occasionally..."
"My room is like my sanctuary because is where I can relax, have peace and privacy." consider revising this. to something like this "my room is like my sanctuary because it is where I can relax, be peaceful and have privacy"
also here, "she has been the only one that [has] been there for me"
"the only person that has preoccupied about us." Preoccupied I believe is not the word for this statement.
"She [has] even worked "
"to watch soccer [games]"
"[who] he lives in Mexico,"
"she always [does] the contrary of what I say."
"My favorite part [of] my family"
"Whereas[,] my mom"
"from there is where I get all my strength" change to "I get all my strength to move forward in life from them."
"From them is where I get support, love and advice" change to "I get support, love and advice from my family,"
Pretty much, the last paragraph you have here is a conclusion and a pretty good conclusion. Just need to check your grammar throughout the essay. You also need to check your tenses as you tend to talk about the past but use present tense in a couple of your sentences.
hope this is help and for the changes to the sentences those are just suggestions.
Reply:First of all take out: My home is where I grew up.
that is an obvious statement
Start the next sentence with My home is a place...
You start alot of your sentences with 'my home' as well. Try to mix it up.
beauty
My home is a typical house as all houses around my block with palm trees by the streets, entrance yard surrounded by a fence and a driveway in front of the garage. My house has two bedrooms, one bath, a large garage, a front yard with a small colorful vivid garden and a driveway. My home is always semi–clean, dishes are always washed, trash always taken out and the wood floor is always broom but there is dust on furniture, TV, on pictures and portraits. In the garage is where my family stores all our material belongings, such as old furniture, TVs, bicycles and clothes that we don’t like or wear. The living room is ample, it has two leather soft brown sofas, a dinner table, a cabinet with a TV on top, two small tables around the large sofa, portrait of a flower and pictures on top of the middle table and paste on the wall. My room which is my favorite part of the house is always neat and clean and smells like Hawaiian breeze because of an air freshener. My room is like my sanctuary because is where I can relax, have peace and privacy.
My family is one of the typical Mexican families. We go to church, celebrate important dates such as “Las Posada” (Mexican Christmas Ceremony), Thanksgiving and Christmas. My family is really compatible and hardworking. My mom is a hard worker, brave, and strong. She has been a dad and a mom to me at the same time; she has been the only one that been there for me, the only one that has work for me and my siblings, to give us a better life and the only person that has preoccupied about us. She had even worked up to twelve hours a day to set a roof over our heads. My step-dad is a serious and earnest person, he doesn’t like to drink, doesn’t likes fast food nor go to parties but he likes to watch the soccer game and spend time with the family. In contrast of my 19 year old brother, which he lives in Mexico, he’s an alcoholic, loves to go to parties, likes clubbing and spends time with his friends instead of his family. My younger sister Leslie is annoying, stubborn and messy. She never listens to me, she always do the contrary of what I say.
My favorite part my family is when we all co-exists including my aunts, uncles, and cousins. We all gather to go to church, eat dinner, and watch a soccer game or a movie. In my family women make the dinner but when they all work my uncles and my step-dad make dinner, they take turns. When my uncles and step-dad cooks they always make carne asada, the only food that they can cook well. Whereas my mom and aunts cook different sort of food such as shrimp soup or “birria”, which is a goat meat. When all my naughty little cousins assemble its like a commotion in a hallway, they scream, talk loud and dance, making a big mess all around the house, jumping on the couches like frogs, playing with toys and leaving them on the ground, and hanging on the entrance fence like monkeys on monkey bars.
My family is really important to me because from there is where I get all my strength to go forward in life. With out them by my side I could not be what I am today. I would do anything for them. From them is where I get support, love and advice. I belief that with out family and love we would not be able to live or progress in life.
Can someone help me make a conclusion for this essay? and correct any mistakes? please?
where you say "always broom" I believe it should be always broomed. You do say My home too many times try beginning the sentence with something like my parents... my sisters... my brothers... help keep my house clean. etc etc. Another good way to not say "my home" is "we always keep my house..." "sometimes we..." "Occasionally..."
"My room is like my sanctuary because is where I can relax, have peace and privacy." consider revising this. to something like this "my room is like my sanctuary because it is where I can relax, be peaceful and have privacy"
also here, "she has been the only one that [has] been there for me"
"the only person that has preoccupied about us." Preoccupied I believe is not the word for this statement.
"She [has] even worked "
"to watch soccer [games]"
"[who] he lives in Mexico,"
"she always [does] the contrary of what I say."
"My favorite part [of] my family"
"Whereas[,] my mom"
"from there is where I get all my strength" change to "I get all my strength to move forward in life from them."
"From them is where I get support, love and advice" change to "I get support, love and advice from my family,"
Pretty much, the last paragraph you have here is a conclusion and a pretty good conclusion. Just need to check your grammar throughout the essay. You also need to check your tenses as you tend to talk about the past but use present tense in a couple of your sentences.
hope this is help and for the changes to the sentences those are just suggestions.
Reply:First of all take out: My home is where I grew up.
that is an obvious statement
Start the next sentence with My home is a place...
You start alot of your sentences with 'my home' as well. Try to mix it up.
beauty
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