Do you like my new poem?

Hi…I’m…a little green vine,


I want to find, a fence to climb,


I want to grow, twelve feet long,


Careful not to touch the lawn,





Spring, Seeds, the start of me,


I think I’ll go, climb that tree,


On my tips, buds will grow,


I'll put on a flower show,





Here she comes, water can,


Sunshine Lady’s, garden plan,


She likes me, her little green vine,


I dance in the wind in the summertime.





Hi…I’m…a little green vine,


Twisting, running trailing kind,


Black Eyed Susan and Sweat Pea,


They cannot keep up with me,





Watermelon’s big and slow,


Pumpkin vine has time to go,


And the Morning Glory’s blue,


Can’t grow as fast as you-know-who,





So…I’m…off to climb,


A trestle or a bench this time,


She likes me, her little green vine,


I’m here and there and all entwined.





Hi…I’m…a little green vine,


I look for spots of bright sunshine,


Up the wall or through a hole,


I can even climb a pole,

Do you like my new poem?
Yes, very much so. I like this little hesitant voice that grows stronger.
Reply:Very nice. You're quite talented. Keep at it. ( I liked it a lot )
Reply:You definately have potential. If you are a good artist, consider writing an illustrated poetry book about nature for children.
Reply:I've never heard anything like it, it's adorable.
Reply:this would be a great children's book! if you published this as a children's book i would definitely buy it!



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